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Advertisement, November 25th, 2017, 3:14 am
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Squirreltastic-Blue, November 21st, 2017, 2:24 am
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- I see you're doing the right-to-left format, which is fine, but it's also important to maintain the top to bottom format.
In your final panel, the text window is sectioned into two parts, but the top one really needs to be on the right side and not the left. This is because you have a conflicting draw point for reading.
Do you start on the right, or the top? The positioning of them makes it unclear because both are demanding first attention.

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